Talk:Withdrawal strategies
Development is finished. Ready for main space? --Quebec 18:42, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
- I haven't been following the development of the article however I'll try to review it and provide comments in the next couple of days. My initial though is the lead in section is a bit "heavy" with article links. I'll ponder that further, so expect comments and edits upcoming. --Peculiar Investor 22:42, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
- OK. --Quebec 23:05, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
- I have reworked the lead-in section. Please feel free to comment, edit, or rollback my changes as you see fit. I do have one 'procedural' comment. Although there is an interwiki link to the Bogleheads wiki, I do not believe that using Bogleheads wiki articles as Main article ({{Main}}) to link to the sub-article that has been (or will be) summarised is appropriate. They should either be References or External links in my viewpoint. Otherwise article is ready for article space so has been moved there. --Peculiar Investor 14:48, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
Done: Bogleheads articles moved to external links. Thanks for the article review! --Quebec 16:01, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- I have reworked the lead-in section. Please feel free to comment, edit, or rollback my changes as you see fit. I do have one 'procedural' comment. Although there is an interwiki link to the Bogleheads wiki, I do not believe that using Bogleheads wiki articles as Main article ({{Main}}) to link to the sub-article that has been (or will be) summarised is appropriate. They should either be References or External links in my viewpoint. Otherwise article is ready for article space so has been moved there. --Peculiar Investor 14:48, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
- OK. --Quebec 23:05, 31 January 2024 (UTC)